Score: 5

"Welcome to Newgrounds"

submission: introducing myself to ng

date: September 1, 2009

I rather enjoy your character designs, they are simple and quirky. Some color would definately add someting to this. Also, the lack of sound effects - albeit just a voice over kind of is a little to much to forgive. I think your humor shows some potential and the sillyness works.

Score: 5

"Simple, a little too simple"

submission: my ipod nano

date: September 1, 2009

Interesting simple drawings that show you have some good drawing ability. It appears this is based on a true account, and the addition of some audio would of made this a bit more impactful.

Score: 7

"This shows promise"

submission: The Sicksons

date: July 29, 2008

This is a short movie based on the greatest television show of all time, The Simpsons - however it is a warped. I thought the plot was simple and nothing really substancial happened. The actual episode would'nt have been all that bad had it not been for the voices. I realize that you are just one person, and doing different voices is hard for different characters - but there are things you could do to improve the quality. For example, not breathing so hard into the microphone. Your artwork was very good and defiantley did the original show justice. Grandpa Simpson was perfect.