Score: 6

"Not a bad start"

submission: Imagination Ep.1

date: March 23, 2008

In this short stop-motion animation, a little randomness happens - different objects turning inside out and all the which way around. I really liked the fly and flyswater, they looked neat, but that was about it. The best part of the movie was the funkyness of the sound loop in the background - it made the movie a bit better. I would work on the speed of the movie, somethings seemed like they took just a tad to long to work.

Ryan

Score: 10

"Awesome movie"

submission: School 13 - I.A.C.W.

date: March 23, 2008

Wow, to say that this was in improvement from your last work would be an understatement and I really enjoyed that one! I do not speak a lick of Russian - but it was a welcome change of pace to read a subtitled animated feature. In this animation, a student's daily life of deciding whether or not gaming all day or studying should be is top priority. It's a really funny movie with a ton of unique and awesome things. I loved your crazy shaky camera movements as if it were'nt an animation but rather a real show. Your characters looked really good with nice backgrounds and above all else quite the fun premise. Keep up the good work - I love it.

Ryan

Score: 9

"A very nice short scary movie!"

submission: Castle Gravenstone

date: March 23, 2008

In this animation, a man races through the Castle Gravenstone in an effort to escape the darkness the dwelves within - but will he be able to confront his fear and succeed? I really enjoyed this short movie - it's got a very nicely animated character featured with some great movements and a beautiful looking castle background. I loved your use of of sound effects - from running to the eerie backdrop. It sends chills down your spine. Great ending - it really catches you off guard. Very nice work - I will be looking forward to your work in the future.

Score: 5

"You are getting better"

submission: Random Things 3

date: March 23, 2008

In this third installment, there are more and more characters and random objects in use - with more violence and a tad bit more color. It would appear that this is a bit short however then the last one though. I would make your animations a little longer. Keep on working at it -

Ryan

Score: 5

"An improvemnent on the first"

submission: Random Things 2

date: March 23, 2008

I'd like to note that you fixed the problem with the audio and made the file size dramatically smaller - plus it's Queen and Queen is amazing. I like that you've added some more originality and characters to the story to make it connect a tad bit more. I would now work on making some more sense into the movie - you are on a good start, keep it up.

Ryan

Score: 5

"okay - could use some work"

submission: Random Things

date: March 23, 2008

In this random short, a whole lot of things happen from a guy turning giant from eating a mushroom to a picture getting angry and exacting it's revenge. It's alright, in a sense - I just wish there was some more to it. Being random is all well in good but maybe adding some more changing of the shapes and such would make it that much better. Making it longer - possibly with some color and shade variations could make a nice difference. The music was alright, but went on to long and made the file size huge. Condense the song to the length of the film and it will be a much smaller file size. Good luck,

Ryan

Score: 8

"A good soundboard."

submission: opie vs jimmy soundboard

date: January 13, 2008

In this soundboard we are treated to the ever funny Jim Norton and Opie of Opie & Anthony in funny short loops of tryanical funnyness. I have to say that I like the show and find them both pretty funny. Nice short lines - I would of liked to of heard longer quotes from them - something similar to the 100 Grand thing but it's not a big deal. The file size was not that big so it works. The quotes were organized well and everything looked good. Keep up the good work.

Ryan

Score: 6

"Not a bad short."

submission: SC Funny Situations

date: January 13, 2008

In this Splinter Cell parody - the mission is a donut shop - the outcome - is humor. There were some funny moments - I like when you through the guy over the counter and the donuts flew.. I definately would like to see some improvements on the character's designs - some more originality for them would be good. That's about the only negative thing I can say about the movie. Keep up the good work.

Ryan

Score: 6

"Better than your last movie - an improvement"

submission: xiao xiao fighting

date: January 13, 2008

This is definately an improvement over your last flash animation. There are much quicker actions ith some neat shaky "camera" shots that up the intensity. I liked the actions of the characters - but I would recommend that along with a play button - you work on the dialouge.

Ryan

Score: 6

"A stick fight."

submission: blue fight(finished)

date: January 13, 2008

First thing, I would add a play button and a replay button. I understanding not having them gives the effect that it's neverending - but it's nice to have options. That being said, this was not a bad stick fight. Good use of gratitious sound effects to match the actions. There was no annoying music loop which is good. In future work, I'd work on making the movie a little bit longer - and have different backgrounds.

Ryan