Score: 5

"Welcome to Newgrounds"

submission: introducing myself to ng

date: September 1, 2009

I rather enjoy your character designs, they are simple and quirky. Some color would definately add someting to this. Also, the lack of sound effects - albeit just a voice over kind of is a little to much to forgive. I think your humor shows some potential and the sillyness works.

Score: 5

"Simple, a little too simple"

submission: my ipod nano

date: September 1, 2009

Interesting simple drawings that show you have some good drawing ability. It appears this is based on a true account, and the addition of some audio would of made this a bit more impactful.

Score: 7

"This shows promise"

submission: The Sicksons

date: July 29, 2008

This is a short movie based on the greatest television show of all time, The Simpsons - however it is a warped. I thought the plot was simple and nothing really substancial happened. The actual episode would'nt have been all that bad had it not been for the voices. I realize that you are just one person, and doing different voices is hard for different characters - but there are things you could do to improve the quality. For example, not breathing so hard into the microphone. Your artwork was very good and defiantley did the original show justice. Grandpa Simpson was perfect.

Score: 7

"A good second outing."

submission: Imagination Ep.2

date: July 21, 2008

You had me worried a little bit at first as the beginning was a little slow and generic with the face and such, but as the short went along, it was noticeable how the flow went a little more smooth. Your fluiditity is getting better by the episode. Keep up the good work!

Score: 8

"Good episode!"

submission: Office Spider: Episode 2

date: July 21, 2008

In the second episode of this "The Office" inspired archnashow, Pete's workmates try to figure out the strange happenings going on. It's funny and quick and I can't wait until the next episode. Very well detailed main character - keep it up!

Score: 7

"A spider in the office."

submission: Office Spider: Episode 1

date: July 21, 2008

What happens when you take your average, ordinary Office inspired television show and add a spider to the mix? Hilarity. And dead animals. This was a fun, simple and short animation that was straight to the point and cute. I like the simplist character designs and backgrounds and felt that the audio was well-placed as well.

Score: 8

"A poster"

submission: Comic-Con 2008 Poster

date: July 21, 2008

A very nice and well detailed poster featuring some classic and iconic Newgrounds imagery. Not bad.

Score: 6

"Not a bad start"

submission: Imagination Ep.1

date: March 23, 2008

In this short stop-motion animation, a little randomness happens - different objects turning inside out and all the which way around. I really liked the fly and flyswater, they looked neat, but that was about it. The best part of the movie was the funkyness of the sound loop in the background - it made the movie a bit better. I would work on the speed of the movie, somethings seemed like they took just a tad to long to work.

Ryan

Score: 10

"Awesome movie"

submission: School 13 - I.A.C.W.

date: March 23, 2008

Wow, to say that this was in improvement from your last work would be an understatement and I really enjoyed that one! I do not speak a lick of Russian - but it was a welcome change of pace to read a subtitled animated feature. In this animation, a student's daily life of deciding whether or not gaming all day or studying should be is top priority. It's a really funny movie with a ton of unique and awesome things. I loved your crazy shaky camera movements as if it were'nt an animation but rather a real show. Your characters looked really good with nice backgrounds and above all else quite the fun premise. Keep up the good work - I love it.

Ryan

Score: 9

"A very nice short scary movie!"

submission: Castle Gravenstone

date: March 23, 2008

In this animation, a man races through the Castle Gravenstone in an effort to escape the darkness the dwelves within - but will he be able to confront his fear and succeed? I really enjoyed this short movie - it's got a very nicely animated character featured with some great movements and a beautiful looking castle background. I loved your use of of sound effects - from running to the eerie backdrop. It sends chills down your spine. Great ending - it really catches you off guard. Very nice work - I will be looking forward to your work in the future.